Exposition Writing

Earlier this term we were learning about exposition writing and then we made our own one I made one about how I think Dory should get a longer memory 

Dory

                                                    

Dorys sometimes is  useful but in the Other hand she gets into a lot of trouble by not Remembering things so I think she should get a longer Memory  so she can help people all the time

Firstly: Dory's Memory Gets her into a lot of Trouble Like when Dory was meant to swim through the Trench but they swam through the Jelly Fish Instead and eventually when they found Nemo. Dory did not even Know who Nemo was ! ! !

Secondly:  When they were following the boat they would of been able to keep up but because Dory kept on getting Distracted by other sea creatures  so they lost were the boat was going, So if she had a longer memory they would be able to stay with the boat and they would of been able to find the nemo quicker

Thirdly:  If another fish  asked her to do a big Favour or Job she would go to do it then she would forget what she was doing and why was she at that place at if she had a brain she would be be able to have a good courier

So altogether in the Future in Books/Movies I think dory should have a longer memory she would be more helpful and a lot smarter !