Wednesday, 29 October 2014
Tuesday, 21 October 2014
Election Reflection
What am I most proud from our election campaign?
Coming 1st= in the class
Why?
Because I know we all worked very hard to get in the top 3 which we achieved
What do I think we could have done better?
I think or speech/ Presentation could've been a bit longer
How could I have done this?
By planning it a bit better and talking a bit more about our party.
Why did I vote for the party I voted for?
The 3 cs because I agree with them that we do need comfy seating and I think they presented their speech really
Advertising Reflection
For part of our party Inquiry we had to make an ad here is our unique ad.
We did a reflection on how well we did on our advertising
How did we grab people’s attention right from the beginning?By being in different Places.
Was our content relevant to our political party policies?We talked about our policies and our party
How did we give our audience a good idea about what our policies are?We asked a rhetorical question How was our ad value for money?It was good because we got the message across in the video.
What was successful about our ad?We told the audience in our ad, what we wanted to change.
If we could change anything what would we do differently next time?Maybe include our more of our policies in the ad, which would make our movie longer.
What skills will I need to improve on to do this?Take longer on the planning and be constructive with our timing to video.
Make sure you justify all your answers. A simple yes or no is not good enough
Exposition Writing
Earlier this term we were learning about exposition writing and then we made our own one I made one about how I think Dory should get a longer memory
Dory
Dorys sometimes is useful but in the Other hand she gets into a lot of trouble by not Remembering things so I think she should get a longer Memory so she can help people all the time
Firstly: Dory's Memory Gets her into a lot of Trouble Like when Dory was meant to swim through the Trench but they swam through the Jelly Fish Instead and eventually when they found Nemo. Dory did not even Know who Nemo was ! ! !
Secondly: When they were following the boat they would of been able to keep up but because Dory kept on getting Distracted by other sea creatures so they lost were the boat was going, So if she had a longer memory they would be able to stay with the boat and they would of been able to find the nemo quicker
Thirdly: If another fish asked her to do a big Favour or Job she would go to do it then she would forget what she was doing and why was she at that place at if she had a brain she would be be able to have a good courier
So altogether in the Future in Books/Movies I think dory should have a longer memory she would be more helpful and a lot smarter !
Florence Nightingale
At school we have been learning about change maker and for home work we had to make a presentation about them My person I did was Florence Nightingale Here is the Prezi I did about her
White Mouse Short story
Before we looked through the the white mouse story we had to predict what was going to Happen in the story. Here is what I predicted
The White mouse
Once upon a time in the allies in mexico in a Deep hole lives a heart Broken Rugged white mouse . who was the only survivor from when the cats invaded there hole. A couple of years ago he found a nice Rat so together they have become secret agents well they think that they are going to try and get a comeback on the evil cats. When they had all their equipment they set of for their adventure they had to walk miles by the time they got there they were exhausted they could not be bothered to even get the cats.
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